Daughter raped as payment 3
The debt finally gets paid off and Sophie starts a new life abroad
The flat on the eighth floor of the Wythenshawe tower block had become a mausoleum after the second visit. The door still hung off its hinges, letting in the cold Manchester wind that carried the distant sound of sirens and the stink of the estate’s overflowing bins. Dave had not slept in days. He sat in the same chair, still scarred from the zip-ties, staring at the bloodstains on the carpet that would never come out. Sophie had not left her room in a week. She showered until the hot water ran out, scrubbed until her skin bled, but the smell of cum and piss seemed to cling to her pores. She spoke in whispers, if she spoke at all. Her eyes were hollow, the light gone.
Dave had tried everything. He begged old mates for loans. He sold the last of his tools. He even went to the police, only to be laughed out of the station. “You owe money to Mick? That’s your problem, mate. No crime here.” He was out of options.
He did not know that Mick’s crew had already made their final decision.
They came at 2:47 a.m., no explosion this time, just the soft creak of the broken door being pushed open. The frame was still splintered and sagging from the last visit; the lock had been gone for weeks. Four of them slipped inside: Mick, Razor, Spike, and Ghost. No balaclavas. No pretense. They knew Dave was broken; they knew Sophie was catatonic. They moved like ghosts themselves.
Dave woke to a hand over his mouth and a knife at his throat. Razor’s blade pressed just enough to draw a thin line of blood.
“Shh, Davey boy. Don’t wake the neighbours.”
They dragged him into the living room, zip-tied him to the chair again, same chair, same ropes. Dave did not fight. He just sobbed quietly.
Mick walked to Sophie’s door and kicked it open. She was curled on the bed in a ball, naked under a thin sheet. She did not scream when they grabbed her, she just whimpered, eyes wide but unfocused, as if she had known this was coming.
They injected her, syringe straight into her arm. Cheap heroin cut with fentanyl. Her body went limp almost instantly. Her eyes rolled back. Her breathing became shallow.
Spike and Ghost carried her out like luggage, naked, limp, head lolling. Mick turned to Dave.
“Debt’s paid, cunt. We’re liquidating the asset.”
Dave sobbed. “No, please, not her, take me.”
Mick laughed. “Too late. She’s worth more on the market than you’ll ever scrape together.”
They left Dave tied to the chair, door hanging open, wind whistling through. He screamed until his voice gave out.
Sophie woke in darkness.
She was in a metal shipping container, cold, rattling, the floor slick with old oil and something sticky. Her wrists and ankles were zip-tied to a metal frame bolted to the wall. She was naked. She was cold. The container smelled of rust, diesel, sweat, and fear, someone else’s fear layered over years.
She heard voices, Eastern European accents, Russian and Ukrainian. Heavy boots. A hatch opened. Light poured in.
Three men climbed in, hard faces, tattoos crawling up their necks, eyes dead. One carried a camera. Another a clipboard.
The leader, tall, scarred, shaved head, crouched in front of her. He slapped her face hard, bringing her fully awake.
“Wake up, English whore.”
Sophie whimpered. “Please, let me go, my dad will pay.”
He laughed, cold, guttural. “Your dad? He’s nothing. You’re the payment.”
They examined her like livestock. The scarred one grabbed her tits, squeezed hard, twisting her nipples until they bled. “Nice udders. White meat always sells high.”
The second man, stocky, bearded, spread her legs roughly. His fingers probed her cunt, dry, painful, pushing inside without mercy. “Still tight. Good. Buyers like tight.”
The third, younger, wiry, forced her mouth open with his fingers. He shone a light down her throat. “Throat looks good. Can take deep.”
They took photos, close-ups of her face, her bruised tits, her swollen cunt, her prolapsed arse. They forced her mouth open wider, shone the light inside. They made her spread her arse cheeks for the camera.
“Say it,” Scar-head ordered. “Say ‘I’m a British whore for sale.’”
Sophie shook her head. He punched her in the stomach, air whooshed out. She gasped.
“Say it!”
“I’m, I’m a British whore for sale.”
They laughed. They filmed her saying it again, sobbing, broken.
Then they raped her.
All three.
One after another.
Scar-head went first. He unzipped, his cock thick, veiny, unwashed, foreskin crusted with yellow smegma, the smell sharp and rancid even in the diesel stink of the container. He spat on the head, thick glob, rubbed it over the shaft, then slapped it against her face with a wet thwack.
“Open wide, English pig. Time to taste Russian cock.”
Sophie clamped her lips. He grabbed her jaw, forced it open with bruising fingers. He shoved in deep, hitting the back of her throat. She gagged instantly, vomit rising, burning her nose. He fucked her face, slow, deliberate, hands in her hair, controlling the rhythm.
“Choke on it, whore. Swallow my meat like the filthy British slut you are. That’s it, take every inch down your worthless throat. You’re nothing but a cum-gargling pig now. Look at you, gagging on Russian dick, your posh little English mouth was made for this.”
He thrust harder, balls slapping her chin, hairy, sweaty. She vomited, bile bubbling around his shaft, running down her chin, dripping onto her tits. He pulled out, let her gasp, cough, then slapped his cock across her face again.
“Say thank you, pig.”
She choked out, voice raw, “Th-thank you.”
He laughed. “Good pig.”
He moved behind her, lined up with her cunt. He spat on her swollen lips once, twice, then rammed in. The head forced past her battered entrance, stretching torn tissue anew. Pain exploded, white-hot, ripping. She screamed, raw, animal.
“Fuck, still tight after all those English pricks?” he grunted. He pounded, short, brutal thrusts, hips slamming her bruised pelvis. Each thrust jolted the frame she was tied to. “Take it, you lying tourist whore. This cunt belongs to Russian cock now. Feel how deep I am? That’s your new home, Russian dick stretching your sloppy British hole. You’re going to leak my cum all the way to Warsaw, you filthy cum-rag.”
He slapped her arse hard, red welts rising over old bruises. “Scream louder, pig. Let the drivers hear what a broken English bitch sounds like. Beg for it. Beg for Russian cum in your filthy womb.”
Sophie sobbed, voice breaking. “Please, stop, it hurts, please.”
He laughed, low, ugly. “Hurts? Good. That’s the point. Lying whores need to learn. Your cunt’s gripping me like it loves it. You’re just a set of holes for men like me to ruin. Say it, say you’re a British cum-dump.”
“I’m, I’m a British cum-dump,” she choked out.
“Louder!”
“I’m a British cum-dump!”
He thrust harder, erratic now, then buried deep. Hot ropes flooded her depths, overflowing around his shaft, dripping down her thighs to the filthy container floor. He ground against her, making sure every drop stayed inside, then pulled out.
“Next,” he grunted.
Stocky Bearded took her face while Scar-head stepped back. Bearded’s cock, shorter but girthy, reeking of sweat and old cum, slapped her cheek.
“Open mouth again, whore. Taste Ukrainian meat. You’re going to swallow every drop, you disgusting English pig. Your throat is mine now, gonna fuck it until you puke, then make you lick it clean.”
She parted her lips, tears streaming. He shoved in deep, gagging her. He fucked her throat, slow, deliberate, making her choke on every thrust.
“Swallow it, English pig. Drink my precum like a good little cum-dump. That’s it, gag on it. You love choking on foreign cock, don’t you? Your throat was made for this. Look at you, tears, snot, vomit, perfect little rape-doll.”
He pinched her nose shut, held her until she thrashed, then let her breathe, only to slam back in.
Wiry Younger moved in, took her arse. No spit. No prep. He pressed the head against her prolapsed ring, pushed. The ring tore wider, sharp, ripping pain that made her vision white out. She screamed, high, broken, into Bearded’s cock.
“Fuck, tight shitter,” Wiry groaned. He sank deeper, inch by inch, until he was buried balls-deep. “Gonna wreck this English arse. Make it gape for the next buyer. Feel how deep I am? That’s your new life, Ukrainian cock tearing your worthless hole apart. You’re going to shit blood for weeks, you filthy tourist pig.”
He pounded, hard, fast, hips slapping her bruised cheeks. Each thrust jolted her forward onto Bearded’s dick, deeper into her throat.
Bearded face-fucked her harder, gagging her until black spots danced in her vision. “Take it, pig. Choke on Ukrainian cock while your arse gets ruined. You’re nothing but a set of holes now. A filthy British cum-rag for Eastern dick. Say it, say you love being our rape-toy.”
“I, love, being your rape-toy,” she choked out between thrusts.
They kept going, rotating, each man sampling every hole. Scar-head back in her mouth, throat-fucking until she puked again. Bearded in her cunt, pounding until she bled fresh. Wiry in her arse, tearing her wider, prolapsing further.
They pissed on her after, hot streams in her mouth, on her face, in her open holes. Scar-head held her head back, forced her mouth open.
“Drink, whore. Russian piss for English pig. Swallow every drop, you disgusting cum-toilet. You’re going to drink piss every day from now on, your new diet.”
She choked, swallowed, tears mixing with the yellow stream.
They left her chained, leaking, shivering, broken.
The container rattled on.
Hours. Days. She lost count.
They stopped once, in a lay-by somewhere in Europe. The hatch opened. More men climbed in, drivers, smugglers. They raped her again, five this time, rotating holes, cumming inside her, on her face, in her hair. Pissed in her mouth. Beat her when she passed out, slaps, punches, boots to the ribs.
“Stay awake, whore. You’re merchandise.”
She woke in Warsaw.
A basement brothel beneath a nondescript block of flats. The room was small, concrete walls, single stained mattress on the floor, a bucket for a toilet, a chain bolted to the wall around her ankle. No window. No light except a dim red bulb.
The madam, old, fat, cigarette dangling from her lip, looked her over.
“Fresh British girl. Good. Clients pay extra for white meat.”
They beat her daily, belts across her arse until it was purple and bleeding, fists to the stomach, slaps to the face until her eyes swelled shut.
They injected her, heroin, fentanyl, whatever was cheapest. Her mind fogged. Pain dulled. Body became compliant.
They used her, 20, 30 men a day. No condoms. No breaks. Just cock after cock in every hole. Face-fucking until she vomited. Anal until she prolapsed and bled. Piss in her mouth. Cum on her face, in her hair, down her throat. They called her “English whore,” “white cum-dump,” “British pig.”
She stopped begging.
She stopped crying.
She stopped thinking of Dave.
She stopped thinking at all.
One day, months later, she looked in the cracked mirror they let her use to “fix her makeup.” Her eyes were dead. Her body marked, bruises, welts, cigarette burns, crude tattoos from clients: “Cum Here” arrow pointing to her mouth, “Breed Me” on her lower belly.
She stared at her reflection and felt nothing.
The madam dragged her back to the bed. Another client waited, fat, sweaty, cock already hard.
Sophie lay down, legs spread automatically.
She did not resist.
She did not speak.
She simply waited for the next cock to enter her, because that was all she was now: a hole, a vessel, a debt finally paid in full, with no end and no mercy in sight.
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Comments (82)
Francis: 4th and most likely final time requesting you. Dear writer. Please Don't do this. Please don't end it here. We came here with a lot of expectations after reading two parts. It will be heartbreaking for many of us specially for me if you end it here without a happy ending. Don't ruin the story by ending it here. Please writer give it a happy ending we asked and deserve. I am literary begging you Please don't ruin it. Don't destroy our expectations. You already ruined Sophie. Please do something. Let anyone save her. Don't do this. Please don't.
Reply↴ • uid:6stx4h0ficThe Wanker: You’ve just told someone to ignore Gunter’s stories so why do you follow your own advice? BTW the word you are looking for is literally not literary.
• uid:h9aki1940Gunter Steinback: I will write part 4, give her a brutal death and dedicate it to you.
• uid:csjvw0k0aFrancis: Do it. Cause I don't care anymore.
• uid:6stx4h0ficFrancis: And thanks for telling me in advance so I know will be just skipping it. I already move on man. I was just cheaking. Thats all. Do whatever you like and makes you feel better.
• uid:6stx4h0ficFrancis: One last thing. Even though I won't be reading it, but I have a request. make sure she is dead at the end. No more torture. Do whatever you want but make sure she is DEAD at the end of the story. Do it.
• uid:6stx4h0ficGunter Steinback: She is not real dude. ....... she is a figment of my imagination. Serious question: are you an actual person or a bot? Because this is so bizarre. This is a fucked up website, but this "lets save Sophie" is seriously the most unusual thing I have come across
• uid:csjvw0k0aFrancis: Yes I'm am an actual person. And I know its all fictional and imaginary. In reality sophie doesn't even exist. Its ok I won't bother you anymore. To be honest I never tried to convinced anyone this much. Even I am feeling weird right now. Sorry about that. I won't bother you again. Just forget it. No need for happy ending or anything at all from this story. Sorry bro. I won't bother you again.
• uid:6stx4h0ficBig Daddy Dick: And I'm literaly telling you dumbasses to stop bitching about a happy ending
• uid:dhv9taiqlHistBuff: Very dark. Dry delivery in dialogues that fits the style. Completely differrent from my own style. Quite interesting read. Thanks for giving of your time to share your fantasies. I see many people don't like the bad ending. Well, bad endings have been written for millenia. It's called tragedy, as opposed to a comedy in its true antique meaning.
Reply↴ • uid:4gmi91iv3Jaybee35: How heartless can you be Gunter?? Don't you feel little bit of sympathy for the poor girl?? She isn’t a slut or arrogant. She never deserve such ending. You should be ashamed.
Reply↴ • uid:y8gkag8lThe Wanker: BORING!!
• uid:8mna90mk0dGunter Steinback: Are you mentally unstable dude? This is a made up person who only exists in my mind. No real people were hurt in the writing of this story.
• uid:csjvw0k0aThe Wanker: I think that the answer to your question Gunter is a resounding YES!
• uid:8mna90mk0cJaybee35: Listen to your readers. Stop this. We want happy ending for Sophie. Ignore the Sophie haters and do the happy ending.
Reply↴ • uid:y8gkag8lCunthat: More brutal
Reply↴ • uid:cyvrl1b0jAquatinted amka: Listen bro. We don't want happy ending for other stories. Make happy ending for this story. Please don't disappoint us like this. Happy ending for this story only.
Reply↴ • uid:59pman0hlJaybee35: People asking to harm Sophie more belong in a mental asylum. Fuck them. Ignore the jerks. Go with the happy ending plot, Gunter.
Reply↴ • uid:y8gkag8lThe Wanker: As do you! In case you haven’t realised it, Sophie is NOT a real person. She is a character in a FICTIONAL STORY. This happy ending bullshit is now getting very boring, so please give it a rest. If you want happy endings watch the Disney channel.
• uid:8bvvy07xi9Jaybee35: Don't you feel any sympathy for the poor girl even if its fictional? How heartless can you be? She never deserved this. She still believe her father will save her till the very end how can you be so cruel.
• uid:y8gkag8lCthulhu: Save her.
Reply↴ • uid:cxavenzWarren Chai: What have you done dude? Is this really how the story is ending? This is absolutely dissapointing. I thought you stored something good for the poor girl. Very dissapointed. Didn’t expect this from you bro.
Reply↴ • uid:3c3umj7zlGunter Steinback: Go read a woman's romance novel in that case. It would be more suited for you.
• uid:1asl70ldt0iBrianna: What the fuck is up with this recent trend where people are demanding "happy endings" to rape stories in the comments? You stupid fuck. You saw the title and expected "Daughter raped..." was going to have a happy ending where she shook hands and thanked everyone for raping her and they all partied? I repeat: You stupid fuck. It's easy as pie to write a story here if you're able to even half-ass it. Write a dreamy, romance-filled rape story of your own. We won't read your bullshit, but you can and pretend it's the first time you're seeing it. Gunter, 5 stars, my friend. Ignore this guy's horseshit.
• uid:8bvxopwwqlJaybee35: What the fuck is up with happy ending? What the fuck is up with your sick brain?
• uid:y8gkag8lDaughterslayer: The real tragedy is that this could’ve been an amazing story with perfect balance if it ended happily. Brutal rape early and mid story, then a uplifting happy ending at the climax giving her a rescue and a caring husband. That would’ve made it truly great. Unfortunately it’s below mid as is.
Reply↴ • uid:ev8sntqrjAlice: Thank you everyone for asking for this. I am really grateful because I wanted to read a happy ending for this story. Take my deepest gratitude.
Reply↴ • uid:45xxrtui499Cooper420: Hey Gunter. You should let Sophie have a good ending.
Reply↴ • uid:1m5fofsnm4Neon: Aquatinted amka I am still waiting for your fucking answer.
Reply↴ • uid:4bmz0tu16i9Aquatinted amka: Sorry. I misunderstood. I take my words back.
• uid:59pman0hlDemon King: This is some of the most sadistic garbage I've read in a long time. Is this the end, or is there more of this trash coming?
Reply↴ • uid:t2pu7wqd9dFrancis: No reply again? 3rd time requesting you. Dear writer. Please Don't do this. Please don't end it here. We came here with a lot of expectations after reading two parts. It will be heartbreaking for many of us specially for me if you end it here without a happy ending. Don't ruin the story by ending it here. Please writer give it a happy ending we asked and deserve. I beg you Please don't ruin it. Don't destroy our expectations. You already ruined Sophie. Please do something. Let anyone save her. Don't do this. Please don't.
Reply↴ • uid:6stx4h0ficHappyendingsr4losers: Shes dog food now specifically because you kept asking. Stop evading the uid and write your own stories if you want it to end a particular way that warms your fuzzies. This is gunters story, not yours, you have zero right to even ask anything dealing with directing how the stroy plays out. Get over it.
• uid:1ek24gxvzmThe Wanker's rapist: @The Wanker: stop fucking homeless dudes, HIV infected faggot
• uid:2ddienbhriBiBoy: I feel as if I'm living in a parallel universe! It's a story, for fuck's sake!! Gunter's story! If you want a happy ending, write your own! Is this what social media does to people?!!
Reply↴ • uid:8n9x2i3m9iMouser: This was brutally intense with a very repulsive end, can you write a final follow up where Sophie and Dave finally get rescued and escape this nightmare?
Reply↴ • uid:72boopyd9iKelly Crummey: Gunter, you kniw what I said in my first comment, I really doubt things can go back to normal but as Big Daddy Dick said, Its a fictional which means there are endless possibilities. So can you do one spare part with a happy turn for most of your readers, for Sophie. Its not like you have anything unfinished. The story is as good as finished. So can you do one extra part with the anticipated happy turn and giving Sophie a husband who will accept her after all that? Just one part with a happy turn can make a lot of readers happy who are not fictional.
Reply↴ • uid:1m5st9p20kFrancis: Hey Kelly. Are you a girl or boy? if Gunter isn't replying, maybe he didn't notice your comment. Try rewriting it or copy pasting it and posting it again.
• uid:6stx4h0ficThe Wanker: I agree it’s very weird and I’m of the opinion that this group is just one person using multiple identities. I just wish that he/she would give it a rest because it has now become fucking boring,
Reply↴ • uid:gnrrw0fv1Kelly Crummey: Let me ask you something Wanker. Is it possible even for 10 persons with 10+ phones = 100 phones to make viewership go more than 2000+ in 8 hours? People were really hyped up and for a happy turn. If I am not wrong, you are the first one who opposed a happy ending. May I ask why?
• uid:1m5st9p20kHappyendingsr4losers: "Kelly" they are not "the first one opposed to a happy ending" they do not have to defend anything to you on any of your comments under whatever names youre using, it is not your story, stop making demands of the author, stop being abusive and disrespectful when they don't placte you, and stop fucking posting you waste of flesh. Bob Ross couldn't even call you a happy accident, you are a mistake. Now fuck off.
• uid:1ek24gxvzmKelly Crummey: Gunter, I don't think there is anything left in this story but since Big Daddy Dick said its a fictional story, then can you Somehow save her miraculously. You did everything in past 3 parts what you wanted so can you spare one final part for us? It's harmless and you will get a lot of appreciation. This story hit 2000 views while your recent 2 stories didn’t even hit 1000, shows how much people were invested and desperately wanted a happy turn. This story is almost as good as finished but a miraculous happy turn can make a lot of people happy and make their read worth while. Think about it Gunter. Just one part with a happy turn is all people are asking. I don't think anything is wrong in it.
Reply↴ • uid:1m5st9p20kBig Daddy Dick: Happy ending , Bad ending. WHO GIVES A FUCK ITS A GODDAMN FICTIONAL STORY! You dumbfucks BEGGING for happy ending. its a fictional story about rape, rape stories don't often end on a good note. Go read other rape stories with happy ending and stop bitching
Reply↴ • uid:dhv9taiqlGunter Steinback: Agree mate, its very fucking weird to be honest. These people agitated for a happy ending for a fictional character who only lives in my head. Think most of them need a good fuck.
• uid:8ah8e0zjKelly Crummey: With due respect, Thats true Big Daddy Dick but many of us still feel bad and if I am correct, only this story caught the attention of most of the people. Almost 2000 people read it in 8 hours because many of them expected a happy turn. you said it yourself that Its a fictional story so why not give us a happy ending when author did everything he wanted in past 3 parts. What else is left there?, so spare one final part for majority of his readers? Is it too much to ask? Why can't be there a one final part for us when its like 70% comments are almost begging for it? The main purpose of the story is fun and satisfaction. If so many of us are getting satisfied seeing a happy turn after all three parts where author was about to end after fulfilling all his rape brutality, I think its fair to make at least a final part for his readers with a happy turn for this once. There is no harm in it.
• uid:1m5st9p20kPerv Lover: Kelly Crummey can you and your bkeeding hearts friends please leave this site this is beyond enough. WHY THE HELL DO YOU CONE TO A SEX SITE TO READ A RAPE STORY AND THEN COMPLAIN ABOUT IT?! Do you think a rapist is going to shake hands and apologize and dance around a fire?! Seriously you people need to gather some sense you're making it unpleasant for the rest of us.
• uid:mzgqy4zlKelly Crummey: I wonder what will you do in the next part. First of all let me tell you I was on the happy ending's side. This isn’t a new life. This isn’t even a life. People who are asking to rape her more should ask themselves like what is left you bozos? She is a vessel. This sounds scary. Insanely scary. Can she gain her mind back? I am afraid we've already lost her. This is not what I expected from you. I thought you were only hyping the rape more and more so the happy turn can be more blissful than ever but I have no expectation after this part. Its like no turning back. I really pray I am wrong but I am really sorry for her and all the readers who expected a happy turn just like me. And sorry Gunter but I am insanely pissed on you too. Its disgusting.
Reply↴ • uid:1m5st9p20kFrancis: No reply? I request you again. Dear writer. Please Don't do this. Please don't end it here. We came here with a lot of expectations after reading two parts. It will be heartbreaking for many of us specially for me if you end it here without a happy ending. Don't ruin the story by ending it here. Please writer give it a happy ending we asked and deserve. I beg you Please don't ruin it. Don't destroy our expectations. You already ruined Sophie. Please do something. Let anyone save her. Don't do this. Please don't.
Reply↴ • uid:6stx4h0ficSUSY: Hey writer. Why this kind of ending? I was expecting something better. Those dead eyes in the mirror, the automatic spreading of legs… she stopped being a person. It hurts so much. Please, write a conclusion where her father finds her and brings her home. Show some mercy. I need it. She deserve to be happy. She did nothing wrong.
Reply↴ • uid:t2pu7wr20cFrancis: Her father is already poor and a gambler. It will be better if someone more richer saves her from this hell and later take her as his wife.
• uid:6stx4h0ficAbu Fatwa: You mother fucking bastard. Make a proper end. Destroy her forever. Why the fuck this bitch is still alive. I want this bitch taken by the gangsters again. And don't you fucking dare stop it. I want to see her destroyed properly forever. Do you understand me?
Reply↴ • uid:38avh4k0jHappyendingsr4losers: Gunter, on the topic of happy endings, don't you dare change the story you intend to tell. Full stop. If you want to make Sophie a gutter whore sucking dogs off for shitty cut to hell crack, no teeth, lost a foot to diabetes, eventually ground to death under a city because some big ass dog fucked her into traffic then you fuckin do it! Its YOUR story. And those wet blankets can shut the fuck up trying to change it for their interests.... Selfish disrespectful little puss buckets....
Reply↴ • uid:1ek24gxvzmThe Wanker: I second that Gunter. I don’t know where these happy ending losers sprung from. They just don’t take no for an answer!
• uid:82e7t7x7v0Abu Fatwa: Exactly Happyendingsr4losers. If Gunter is a son of one father, he will ruin her forever just as you said or else he has 1000 fathers and her mother is a dying whore confirmed. I will wait for next part. If he finishes off the whore, I am all good and he is son of one father else Gunter will only prove he is a bastard. I won't accept that. Its time to destroy Sophie whatever left in her.
• uid:38avh4k0jFrancis: Are you people mentally ok?. How can you say that. You feel no sympathy for Sophie?
• uid:6stx4h0ficHappyendingsr4losers: Francis NO, WE DONT, YOU FUCKING RETARD!!! THERE IS NO SOPHIE!!! Its a StOrY, dont you get that? Are you having trouble discerning reality and fiction? Hint: reality is the stuff that's still there when you stop believing in it. This is a STORY. A STORY. And most importantly, not your story. You have zero artistic input. None. Zilch. Nada. Zero. No amount of cajoling using whatever passive, backhanded, offensive language you attempt to manipulate with is going to change that. YOU HAVE NO POWER HERE!
• uid:1ek24gxvzmLucy: If this is the ending then let me tell you its a Horrible ending. One of the worst ending ever. Wtf.
Reply↴ • uid:fbodtr2whHappyendingsr4losers: Better than being a little pissant bitch....
• uid:1ek24gxvzmBig Daddy Dick: its a rape story dumbass, you read it...now go fuck yourself for looking for something to bitch abo ut
• uid:dhv9taiqlGunter Steinback: Did u get wet tho?
• uid:1asl70ldt0iPhoebe Cates: Guys… don’t lower yourselves like that just for some fictional happy ending. I don’t give a fuck about happy endings, but I genuinely feel bad for all of you. Please don’t do this for a guy who doesn’t care about your opinion. It’s not worth it. Please stop 😭 Just stop.
Reply↴ • uid:45xxw6s6zrjPhoebe Cates: Gunther, you are a good writer but a very horrible person. This is the last time I’m reading your story. Bye bye
Reply↴ • uid:45xxw6s6zrjGunter Steinback: Be honest Phoebe. Did your cunt get wet reading it?
• uid:1asl70ldt0iFrancis: No, writer. Don't do this. You can't end it here. We came here with a lot of expectations. It will be heartbreaking for many of us if you end it here without a happy ending. Don't ruin the story by ending it here. Please writer give it a happy ending we asked and deserve. That's my humble request to you. Please don't ruin it. Don't destroy our expectations.
Reply↴ • uid:6stx4h0ficAquatinted amka: Bruh, what? Why?? I asked you to make an ending where a gentle, good-hearted man marries her and treats her like a human being. No more pain. But you did the complete opposite. This is a betrayal. Make another part writing the ending I asked for. It won’t take much from this part. Just let her meet a first timer who will fall for her and drag her out of this darkness. Don’t disappoint us like that.
Reply↴ • uid:59pman0hlGunter Steinback: This story won't have a happy ending. There are plenty of others which do. I am actually writing a series now which will be much happier, about a group of total degenerates attending a "sex addicts anonymous" meeting. It will be much more light hearted I hope
• uid:8ah8e0zjAquatinted amka: No bro. We want happy ending for this story only. Please don't dissapoint us.
• uid:59pman0hlNeon: After seeing so many requests for a happy ending, I was certain you would at least give the story a happy ending. What a disappointment. Boooo 🤮
Reply↴ • uid:4bmz0tu16i9Gunter Steinback: If you want to write stories where rape is romanticised and made more acceptable by giving it a "happy ending" then go ahead and do that. I think that's quite fucking perverted to be honest.
• uid:1asl70ldt0iThe Wanker: Well said Gunter! Let those that want happy endings write such stories themselves.
• uid:xbjjs0vqAquatinted amka: Bruh, you guys are fighting over a happy ending and bad ending for a fictional story? Can't you guys be a bit more mature and come to an agreement? For those who want a happy ending can get it at the end and those who hate it can enjoy the middle part and leave the ending?
• uid:59pman0hlNeon: Gunter Steinback If I could write, why would I be asking you? You’re the writer here. And do you think happy ending is impossible after rape?
• uid:4bmz0tu16i9Neon: Aquatinted amka Bro Read the parts properly before you speak. People specifically asked for a happy ending at the end. Because the middle parts are already packed full of brutal gangrapes. They’re fine with a happy ending even if it only comes right at the very end of the story. The happy ending side is already compromised enough. Only asked a happy ending at the end. The middle parts are loaded with gangrapes. So you know which side is the childish one and not even ready to accept a small request.
• uid:4bmz0tu16i9Gunter Steinback: @Neon This story wont have a happy ending. Several other stories which I am writing at present will, as I am trying a few new things out.
• uid:8ah8e0zjNeon: Aquatinted amka, Why don't you say something now? Will you still say we didn’t compromised? Just a happy ending what they asked while the other side get all they wanted on the middle parts. Say something Amka. Tell me which side is immature. I am waiting for your reply Amka.
• uid:4bmz0tu16i9Neon: Gunter I request on behalf of them even though I never asked anything fron you. A happy ending is very possible even after rape. I request you too. Do a happy ending for this story.
• uid:4bmz0tu16i9Happyendingsr4losers: Im just going to say it: 1) no author here or anywhere is beholden to you, especially for free, and 2) FUCK YOUR HAPPY ENDING BULLSHIT!!! There are other people in the world, people who have interests that differ from yours, get the fuck over it and stop being an entitled creeper asshole.
• uid:1ek24gxvzmNeon: Happyendingsr4losers, 1) Majority of the people wants happy ending. 2) FCUK THE RAPE ENDING 3) people can ask for anything. If you don't like, then ignore.
• uid:4bmz0tu16i9BiBoy: Just beautiful, Gunter! No happy ending please, this is the perfect way to end a great story. Now she's just a dead eyed whore. As the Wanker said, just merchandise!!
Reply↴ • uid:8n9x2i3m9iRebecca: Gunter, this broke my heart. I humbly requested for Sophie to finally be happy, to have a good man who loves her properly after all that pain. Instead she’s just… destroyed forever. I’m actually gutted. Please give her the happy ending she deserves. I am still requesting for another part where a good man take her as wife and save her life. Please please please.
Reply↴ • uid:38bqer49kGunter Steinback: Rebecca, are you really gutted for Sophie or do you want the happy ending for your own sake? Maybe because you feel guilty that you finger fucked your cunt reading about the brutal rape and torture of a girl? Did this one make you wet also? Its ok, we all have a dark side. Email me if you want to talk about it. I wont judge :)
• uid:1asl70ldt0iThe Wanker: I think the Russian rapist summed it up when he described her as a set of holes. She was no longer human, just merchandise.
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