Ankita Lost her Innocence in mid Air - 3
Ankita being Brutally Assault in Mid air By Vikrant
Jet is in mid-air. Vikrant offered Ankita to have sex with him for money. Janvi also tried to convince her, but Ankita didn't accept the offer. This made Vikrant furious.
Ankita, standing in front of Vikrant, denied fulfilling his erotic wishes even though she needed money to treat her mother.
Ankita
"My mother needs treatment, But not like this."
Janvi already understood that now Ankita has to face the most cruel time of her Life.
Janvi
"Come on, Ankita, It’s just a few hours. Think of the money. Think of your mother."
Ankita shook her head in No.
Vikrant was staring angrily towards Ankita from his seat.
"No?" Vikrant’s voice, low and dangerous, filled the cabin. "Did you just say no to me?"
Janvi stepped back as she sensed the anger in his voice. She knew this refusal would ignite Vikrant’s fuse. She had seen it before. Ankita, poor naive girl, had just signed her own death warrant, or something worse.
Suddenly Vikrant rose from his seat and with full power he slap Ankita.
A sharp crack echoed through the cabin. Slap was so strong that She fall on the floor of the jet. Before she could even process the pain in her cheek What just happened? Vikrant kick in her stomach then another kick, then another, hard and brutal, slammed into her stomach. Each blow stole her breath, twisted her insides. The pain was too immense that she can't even scream for pain, too sharp for tears. She shrink her self, pressing her hands against her throbbing abdomen, trying to shield herself from the relentless assault. Her body started to shake. "No girl can ever disobey me!" Vikrant while kicking.
Vikrnat grab her hair from her calps and dragged her across the cabin floor. He dragged her to his bed cabin in his private jet and threw her on bed. Ankita can't bare constant painfull Actions one by one.
Vikrant's fingers went to the buttons of his shirt, open one by one.
"If you had obeyed me," he began, his voice dangerously low, "then you wouldn't have to face this pain. But it's too late now. Today, I will make you beg for death."
After removing shirt he unfastenedhis belt. The heavy leather strap slid free. His trousers followed then his underwear. His rock hard dick is swinging in air to bite Ankita.
Vikrant climbed onto the bed, He seized her wrists, pinning them above her head with one hand. With his other he slap across her face. Then another, and another. Her head rocked with each blow. "We could have done this easily ."
"Please," Ankita sobbed, her voice raw, broken. "Please let me go."
But Vikrant was beyond listening. He tore her uniform shirt. The buttons ripped free. Her shirt parted, revealing her black push-up bra reveling her deep cleavge on her milky thick body. The sight seemed to ignite a fresh spark of lust, in Vikrant’s eyes.
He brought his throbbing cock to her face, its head brushing against her lips. Ankita squeezed her eyes shut, clamped her mouth tight. She had no strength left, no will to witness her own degradation.
"Open your mouth," Vikrant commanded "Take it in your mouth."
Ankita kept her lips sealed. Vikrant’s gaze flicked to Janvi. He made a gesture with his chin. Janvi, understanding, moved to a nearby drawer, pulling out a sleek, metallic object. An electric cigarette lighter.
Ankita’s eyes still shut, don'tknow what'scomingfor her. She didn’t see Janvi approach.
"Pin her hands," Vikrant ordered.
Janvi grabbed Ankita’s wrists, holding them firmly against the headboard. Her grip was strong. Vikrant flicked the lighter. A small, blue flame hissed to life. He held it there for a moment, letting the tip glow red-hot. Then, with a brutal precision, he pressed the hot tip onto Ankita’s navel.
A scream tore from Ankita’s throat. A sound of pure agony. Her body arched, convulsed, but Janvi’s grip held her fast. The smell of burning flesh filled the air. Tears, silent and endless, streamed from her eyes.
"Please," she choked out, her voice ragged with pain. "Leave me, please!"
"Your fault, sweetie," Janvi. "You didn't take his offer. Now suffer."
"Please," Ankita screamed, her voice cracking. "I'll do anything! Please, please!"
Vikrant’s with evil smile. He lifted the lighter, a small, burn mark now evident on her stomach. "Janvi, bring some ice."
Janvi released Ankita’s hands and moved to the small fridge. Ankita’s body shook uncontrollably, a violent shake from head to toe. Janvi returned with a tray of ice cubes. Vikrant took one, pressing it onto the burnt skin of Ankita’s navel. The cold shock gave her relief. Her breath satrted to even out. She lay there, sobbing, a raw, broken sound. Fear, cold and absolute, gripped her.
Vikrant brought the lighter, still hot, close to her face. "Now, do as I say. Follow my every command be my slave Otherwise, next time, I will insert this burning lighter in your vagina."
The words hit her like a physical blow.
Her eyes, wide and terrifically open. "No, no," she whimpered, tears . "I'll do anything. Please, please." Sobbing.
Janvi started to laugh. Vikrant, still holding the lighter, pointed his cock at Ankita’s face. "Open your mouth. Take it."
Ankita’s gaze, darted between the burning lighter and the cock. She closed her eyes again, . She accepted her fate. Her lips parted with a small opening. Vikrant pushed the head of his cock into her mouth, a brief, probing motion, then withdrew it. He watched her, a cruel satisfaction in his eyes. He thrust it in again, deeper this time, filling her mouth.
"Tighten your grip," he commanded, his voice muffled. "Twist your tongue around it."
Ankita, her body still shaking, obeyed. She clamped her lips around him, a tight, desperate seal. Inside her mouth, her tongue, clumsy and unwilling, began to circle the smooth, hard shaft. The action, hesitant at first, seemed to ignite something in Vikrant. He groaned, a low, animal sound. He seized her head with both hands, his fingers digging into her hair, and began to thrust into her mouth, hard and fast deep in her throat, started to fuck her mouth vigorously.
"Why waste your first fresh shot in her mouth?" Janvi "When you can use that rock to tear her tiny, tight virgin vagina?"
Vikrant paused, a thought in his eyes. He pulled out of Ankita’s mouth, a wet pop. He looked at Janvi, then back at Ankita. Janvi’s suggestion resonated with him.
He shifted, pushing himself up, then settled between Ankita’s legs. He was too aroused to waste another second to remove her all remainingclothes. With a rough motion, he just raised up her skirt. tearing the fabric of underwear; he simply ripped it, a thin band of lace giving way. His throbbing cock aligned with her pussy, its tip brushing against her wet folds. Her vagina was tight, a virgin passage, resisting his entry. He grunted, pushing harder. It wouldn't go.
With a growl of frustration, Vikrant pulled back slightly, then, with a powerful thrust, insert himself into her. A piercing scream tore from Ankita’s lips. Her body started to shake, her legs thrashing against the sheets. He was fully inside her, hot and thick, stretching her beyond her limits.
He began to thrust, a relentless rhythm, pounding into her. Each plunge sent fresh waves of agony through her. She cried out, whimpered, but he showed no mercy. her body a puppet to his movements. He fucked her for ten minutes, a brutal, unfeeling assault. Then, with a final, deep thrust, he groaned, his body tensing. A hot gush flooded inside her, filling her, burning her.
Vikrant collapsed onto her, his body heavy and tired. His cock remained within her, still pulsing faintly. Ankita lay beneath him. She couldn’t speak, couldn’t move, couldn’t even think. He was so utterly exhausted that within two minutes, he slipped into a heavy sleep, still buried inside her.
Janvi watched the scene for a moment, a faint smile playing on her lips. She turned to leave the cabin. Before stepping out, she approached Ankita, reaching down to pat her cheek, a gesture that held no comfort, only cold malice.
"We still have 13 hours in the air, sweetie," Janvi’s voice, a soft purr, brushed against Ankita’s ear. "So this ain't over yet."
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Comments (145)
Demon King: Hey where is part 4? Did Ankita get Justice or not? Why stop? Give him a good time as long as he's in the plane and give Ankita Justice once they land.
Reply↴ • uid:1m5fopx0qiJilie Williams: Please, writer, give Ankita a real happy ending this time 🥺 Let a kind, handsome hero (pilot/police/undercover agent, anyone) burst in, save her at the last second, punish Vikrant and Janvi in the worst way possible, and carry Ankita away to safety. Let her reunite with her mother, heal, fall in love with her rescuer, and finally leave that jet with the biggest, brightest smile on her face. She deserves to win. Please let her win and be happy. 💔🙏
Reply↴ • uid:t8q6de98Roy: Hello Silent Writer? Can you answer me. I need to ask something
Reply↴ • uid:o0hvmilhrbSilent writer: ?? Yes
• uid:6hfu7wcm9cRoy: With due respect, My question is why do you hate happy ending? I mean this is just a story site. Not a reality show. Can you please tell me your issue with a happy ending? I really want to know
• uid:o0hvmilhrbJack: It was really Horrible. You should really save her if you make further part. This is truely heartbreaking
Reply↴ • uid:t2pu7wr6idWei Lee: Thank you for sharing your ending view, but my answer is direct no. I found the ending extremely disturbing and unpleasant. Please consider changing it or never release the next part.
Reply↴ • uid:emd36p7zjAuto Driver: Hi Admin, plz upload next part Fast. I have read your next part concept and it's actually good. So plz go ahead.
Reply↴ • uid:4rzl3vtqmWapol: Brother what have you done.
Reply↴ • uid:7b6jlcloijUV: Bro don't upload new parts. Since you asked, My answer is obviously. There's no need to upload next parts. We had enough of it. We can't see Ankita in more pain. Sorry bro
Reply↴ • uid:6stx4h0ficKirby: I'm asking 3rd time Is there any way you can change the ending amd give Ankita Justice and a happy finishing? I am pleading u
Reply↴ • uid:7b6jlclm9dSean Abbott: In my view, Ankita ought to be saved once thirteen hours have passed, allowing karma to deliver its judgment upon Vikrant. Ankita is beautiful and hot. I am sure you have someone special stored for her who will treat her like a queen. The best option is the old ceo's son but if he doesn’t have a son then make one. Its a fictional story so you can do it easily.
Reply↴ • uid:7b6jlclzrcJarred: How are you going to save ankita? What is your next plan?
Reply↴ • uid:2pdvucf2v0Jarred: Can you make the real CEO come back for revenge?
Reply↴ • uid:2pdvucf2v0Roy: Silent writer, please listen carefully It's not always about right or wrong. You should also know what your audience is asking from you. I want to show you a story where the writer started with humiliation and brutality but did happy ending because his fans asked him including me. /2024/07/how-i-made-aditi-my-sex-slave-by-blackmailing-and-raping-her-part-1 This person did a lot for his fans and even made me drop tears of happiness. And his fans loves him too for that. You should learn from him. He is a good writer but more importantly a good person who listens to his fans. I can appreciate that you did a lot of work for this story but sorry, its not what we asked or wanted. So please don't upload next part. And again, I really appreciate you for your hard work but we don't need it with that ending. We're really sorry.
Reply↴ • uid:o0hvmilhrbVivi: If you ever read this, Author… please consider giving ankita a happy ending instead.
Reply↴ • uid:7b6jlcloibBig Mom: Bro… we’re still recovering from part 3. Please just let us live. Do not upload the next part. Never.
Reply↴ • uid:7b6jlclxikKirby: Is there any way you change the ending and let Ankita have justice? Please let me know and if not then please don't upload any further part.
Reply↴ • uid:7b6jlclm9dRoy: It's not always about right or wrong. You should also know what your audience is asking from you. I want to show you a story where the writer started with humiliation and brutality but did happy ending because his fans asked him including me. /2024/07/how-i-made-aditi-my-sex-slave-by-blackmailing-and-raping-her-part-1 This person did a lot for his fans and even made me drop tears of happiness. And his fans loves him too for that. You should learn from him. He is a good writer but more importantly a good person who listens to his fans. I can appreciate that you did a lot of work for this story but sorry, its not what we asked or wanted. So please don't upload next part. And again, I really appreciate you for your hard work but we don't need it with that ending. We're really sorry.
Reply↴ • uid:o0hvmilhrbReply: You cant compare writer. And if it's fictional story then What is wrong to read Ankita getting Humiliated. I found this 3 parts tottaly worth to reading. And the concept of next part is also looks good and full er0tic as she was used by pilots and cleaner. In my suggest writer should go ahead with that.
• uid:6hfu7wcv9aKirby: No. I agree with Roy. The writer should not upload the next part and lool at the comments, Literary over 80℅+ don't want it. So the writer should not upload next part
• uid:7b6jlclm9dKuch bhi: If the Author who's name is I am Not Author is so good then where is he or she now. Why forgot story in mid way. Not just Aditi story. All the stories uploaded by him is Incomplete.
• uid:5q9h1o7loikRoy: If you look carefully he stopped Aditi story after part 3 but his fans encouraged him to write more. I am not saying " Silent Writer" is a bad writer, infact he is good but he should know what reader wants. You said its fictional so why not do what majority likes? When everyone or majority asked for a happy ending "I'm not Author" didn’t turned down his fans. He did the happy ending at part 8 and his fans patiently waited for the happy ending and really appreciated But "Silent Writer" simply said he won't change the ending and asked fans if they want it or not and majority of the fans simply refused. So "Silent writer" should not upload next part. And to be honest "I'm not Author" gave us everything we wanted. He might be busy or not interested in writing stories but he is a hero atleast to me. He won me when he uploaded part 8. I don't won't to argue. With due respect, Silent writer should not upload and most likely he won't because most of us said no. But I'll still atleast appreciate Silent writer for his hard work.
• uid:o0hvmilhrbRoy: The "Roy" above me isn't me. Look at the Uid. uid:o0hvmilhrb and the writer cursing Silent writer uid is uid:1d89lhll7v6i I never abuse anyone. Silent Writer , Its not me. Its someone using my name. I also want happy ending but I would never abuse someone for that
• uid:o0hvmilhrbSeraphine25: I had high expectations from this part but what a ler down by the rape incident. So, karma will never going to touch Vikrant? Then it’s better for everyone (and to the story itself) if you just let it end here. Please stop.
Reply↴ • uid:45xywgwnqraKirby: Hey why are you not answering my comment Silent Writer? I am asking you again and please reply. Can't we please somehow destroy Vikrant and give that girl Ankita justice? I really despise what you are doing to her. If Ankita is not getting Justice then please don't just upload anything.
Reply↴ • uid:7b6jlclm9dSilent writer: Ok, what's your question??
• uid:6hfu7wcm9dKirby: Is there any way you can change the ending amd give Ankita Justice and a happy finishing?
• uid:7b6jlclm9dKirby: Hey writer I am asking something. Please reply to me.
Reply↴ • uid:7b6jlclm9dKirby: Hey why are you not answering my comment Silent Writer? I am asking you again and please reply. Can't we please somehow destroy Vikrant and give that girl Ankita justice? I really despise what you are doing to her.
Reply↴ • uid:7b6jlclm9dRichard MacLeod: He said he is not going to change and asked if he should upload the next part as it is or not. In next next part Ankita will be more humilated. So my reply was no. And you should also say the same. But its upto you kirby.
• uid:1360jpvm9jKirby: In that case my answer will also be a big NO. But I want to hear from the writer so please could you not reply my comment? I am making the same comment again. Please let the writer reply to me.
• uid:7b6jlclm9dRichard MacLeod: Oh sorry. My bad and thanks for the last line. Thank you.
• uid:1360jpvm9jKirby: Welcome.
• uid:7b6jlclm9dKirby: Most welcome
• uid:7b6jlclm9dKirby: And by the way, I was also against the Rape of Ankita. Sadly we can't undo it.
• uid:7b6jlclm9dRichard MacLeod: Hey. Honestly, I’d love it if you don't upload the next part and I also don’t think you need to start a completely new story either.
Reply↴ • uid:1360jpvm9jLilyx: Its not that I am opposing the idea of continuation of this story but if things are going against Ankita then definitely you should not upload. As simple as that.
Reply↴ • uid:1m5foftfzlUV: Bro don't uoad new parts. Since you asked, My answer js obviously. There's no need to upload next parts. We had enough of it.
Reply↴ • uid:6stx4h0ficUV: Don't Upload*
• uid:6stx4h0ficUV: No No No.
Reply↴ • uid:6stx4h0ficNitrosix: Silent writer. Someone has used my username to post comments on your story. I haven't read your stories or posted comments. The uid numbers are different. You can write about whatever you like!!
Reply↴ • uid:2nhj091ihlB.R.I.T.N.E.Y.: Silent Writer !!! This is your story and your story alone so don't cave to these people !!! This place is called a sex story site and if anyone of these sensitive people can't handle raw nasty sex !!! they should all take a walk !! For fucks sake my numerous graphic rape and sodomy stories are so much worse than this story !!! I'm encouraging you to keep these stories of yours going !!! They're so descriptive and very well written !!! Maybe you should print Graphic sex or rape on top of your story to warn these so sensitive readers !!! I give you a 5-star rating !!! Britney
Reply↴ • uid:1cr5cbcb27n4Uchiha Madara: Bro, do you seriously think we want another part after reading the disgusting ending you stored for her? No bro. Please NOOO. Keep the next part to yourself PLEASE
Reply↴ • uid:7b6jlcloijLoveMeHateMe: Life is not fair and shit happens. She had the opportunity to have it the easy way. I love it keep going!
Reply↴ • uid:1dnlc7k06pebAnonymous 2: You should do neither. Don't upload or start a new story. I request you.
Reply↴ • uid:7b6jlclm9iSilent writer: So, should I upload the next part or not? It's already written, and the ending isn't what everyone wants. Or should I write a new story instead?
Reply↴ • uid:cyvofspqmIzzy: If you can't make part 4 based on Ankita winning and redeeming herself then Obviously don't. And you should not write new stories as well. This Ankita story part 3 is horrible and made me almost puke and I am sure many more people will agree with me on this. So you should not upload next part nor you should write some new stories.
• uid:7b6jlclqr9Silent writer: Just give me one reason what's wrong. On this website i have read stories more brut@l than this. And it's totally imagination. I have already told you I am not going to change ending. The party ti have written , Ankita was dragged in flight by Pilot where they release all their 15 hr Flight tiredness on Ankita. Then Cleaner Enter, who saw Ankita, then Cleaner also took his turn on Ankita. This is what in next part. And no Ankita is never going to see happy ending as it is a fictional story written for those who wants to fantasies and mastubate.
• uid:6hfu7wcm9iLaracroft1984: First of all, yes I agree with izzy. That was sad how you turned down my idea because I did a lot of writing there. But it's OK. Don't upload the next part, since it will be more heart-breaking for us all. You already gave us so much pain by letting the bad person win. So please don't make the next part or any other part. You asked us if you should upload the next part or not, so our straightforward answer is no. Don't upload the next part or any other story. Thank you.
• uid:8n9y1no144Vishu Bhai: Silent writer, please dont listen this Fairy tale lovers. No one feel puke while reading instead your part 3 made me constantly Fap. And no one told this laracroft to write such big paragraph. So go for it Pt 4. And dont care about ratings. Let this guy's read kids Fary tale.
• uid:2dzsjxwv99Anonymous 2: No Writer. We don't need anything from you after part 3. Sorry but the answer is no. Leave it. just leave it.
• uid:7b6jlclm9iAnonymous 2: Imagination or not bt the emotion is real. I request you to stop this story or any other. Don't upload.
• uid:7b6jlclm9iNiji: Obviously not
• uid:7b6jlcloijLilyx: Nope.
• uid:1m5foftfzlLilyx: No.
• uid:1m5foftfzlKirby: Wtf No. With the ending you mentioned, ABSOLUTELY NOT
• uid:7b6jlclm9dHazel: No need to make next part. You already ruined everything. We are not hearless like you. Its better if you stop here. Thank you for destroying her and our expectations.
Reply↴ • uid:emd36p7zlSilent writer: For those who want a happy ending story from my side, it's a totally fictional story that I just imagined from watching different dramas, movies, and web series. In those, you will find this type of story normal. So I just typed my imagination for timepass. I am not going to change the ending to a happy one. If you want the next part, which I hinted at in my reply to Roy, then tell me or let it go.
Reply↴ • uid:2x0gt8h1b0cRoy: Then leave it. Forget it.
• uid:o0hvmilhrbRoy: We don't want next part if Ankita is suffering more and that Monster is still winning. Leave the story.
• uid:o0hvmilhrbPaul Harvor: Is there any way we can make you change the ending? I really want to see a happy ending in this story
• uid:emd36p7hlAlice: Author I sincerely request u. PLEASE PLEASEEEEE make happy ending for ANKITA. PLEASEEEEE, PLEASEEEEE.
• uid:7b6jlclxibHazel: Let it go. We are not heartless like you or Vikrant. So leave it. Thanks for giving us and that poor girl this much pain.
• uid:emd36p7zlLaracroft1984: No don't upload next part. Thank u.
• uid:8n9y1no144Roy: I am waiting for your response. Please response
Reply↴ • uid:o0hvmilhrbRoy: THE LAST THING I WANT FROM THIS STORY IS VIKRANT DIE A HORRBLE DEATH WHILE ANKITA GETS A RICH CARING HUSBAND AND LIVE WITH HER MOTHER HAPPILY. 🤬🤬
Reply↴ • uid:o0hvmilhrbSilent writer: Thats why not uploading next part. In the End Vikrant walk freely to ruined next girl. And you will never like what happened with her.
• uid:2x0gt8h1b0cSilent writer: In next part Pilot of that flight have already seen what is going on with Ankita so When Flight land and every one leaving flight that time both Pilot of that Flight Pull Ankita back in Flight where they b@ng her mercilessly then Threw her body in Flight garbage section from where she never return. If you want this then tell me so I can upload. Cuz i am not in mood to change end as per readers want.
• uid:2x0gt8h1b0c.: Are we all ok with this ending?
• uid:cyvofspqmRoy: If it's so then go for it. Actually it's look more fun and interesting. What can we do if it's Ankitas destiny. Dont change the end to happy.
• uid:cyvofspqmRoy: NO WE ARE NOT. LEAVE THE STORY
• uid:o0hvmilhrbWohooo: Plz bro dont do this. It's the perfect ending plz .....Dont listen this Roy.
• uid:2x0gt8h1b0jAlice: PLEASEEEE CHANGE IT PLEASEEEEE
• uid:7b6jlclxibRoy: BRO PLEASE REPLY ME. DID YOU READ MY COMMENT IN PART 2???? PLEASE GO AND SEE.. I ALMOST BEGGED YOU TO SAVE ANKITA.. HOW COULD YOU...
Reply↴ • uid:o0hvmilhrbRoy: THE LAST THING I WANT FROM THIS STORY IS VIKRANT DIE A HORRBLE DEATH WHILE ANKITA GETS A RICH CARING HUSBAND AND LIVE WITH HER MOTHER HAPPIL. 🤬🤬
Reply↴ • uid:o0hvmilhrbSamanthaCD: Next part? Fuck Vikrant
Reply↴ • uid:7b6jlcloidEdward Newgate: Yes thats right. Go with laraccroft1984 points please
Reply↴ • uid:emd36p7m1Edward Newgate: I am sorry but this is this is really disgusting. This part ruined the build up. I am so sorry Ankita. She doesn’t deserve this rape.
Reply↴ • uid:emd36p7m1Linda: Requesting for a twist where Vikrant empire finally collapse by Ankita's old secret admirer and then he marries Ankita and show Janvhi her place.
Reply↴ • uid:emd36p7zjEdward Newgate: I thought that was the original plan. Saving Ankita. This part surprised me in a bad way.
• uid:emd36p7m1Ginger dad: Silent writer I am waiting for next part. Let Ankita have good ending. Its already messed up but still want to see Ankita happy.
Reply↴ • uid:emd36p7qjMcDonald's forever: Sometimes you should listen to your audience too. Ankita is a nice girl with morality. Not some whore. Vikrant is a villain. Not even in movies villain get to rape the female lead. Sorry if I said too much but this rape really made me dissapointed
Reply↴ • uid:7b6jlclzrjMcDonald's forever: Brother I told you to save ankita. This is not what I wanted. I am heartbroken. Why are you on Vikrant's side? This is really bad. Now I request you to follow LARACROFT1984 Leads and save Ankita. This is not what we expected from you. You let us down.
Reply↴ • uid:7b6jlclzrjJhyis: And don't start another story before completing it.
Reply↴ • uid:8n9y1no144Jhyis: I read the suggestion laracroft gave and I completely agree with her. I never wanted Vikrant to even lay a finger on Ankita and return of the ceo but its ok. Laracroft's idea is also better. Go for ig waiting for next part
Reply↴ • uid:8n9y1no144Zui_lui: I thought this episode is about Ankita getting saved from Vikrant and Vikrant having to face defeat for the first time. What a let down. And don't write another story before finishing it. Give Ankita a happy ending as per suggestion of Lara first.
Reply↴ • uid:emd36p7qmJhyis: Same. Many people asked in previous parts so I thought we might see Ankita stopping Vikrant. thanks because of you I found laracroft's comment down there. Its good actually
• uid:8n9y1no144Mitchell: I have read all 3 parts. This story literally turn me on. But bro you forgot 1 thing. Vikrant forgot to rip her @n@l apart. Do this a way that Ankita should feel hell out there. In some comments, people are saying to save Ankita. Not needed. Vikrant is Hero of the Story and dont change it.
Reply↴ • uid:cyvofspqjKirby: Can't we somehow destroy Vikrant and give that girl Ankita justice. I am really surprised you made part 3 this horrible even after reading the comments in part 2 and 1. You read the comments right?
Reply↴ • uid:7b6jlclm9bKirby: Hello? No answer?.
• uid:7b6jlclm9dUV: BRO what did you do? you should have saved ankita. Atleast go with Lara Croft's suggestions and make the happy ending please.
Reply↴ • uid:6stx4h0ficHf: Moree and more hurt
Reply↴ • uid:6hfu7wcv9bLaracroft1984: Silent Writer, I appreciate your sorry but it won't bring back what Ankita lost. You really destroyed what we expected from u. But still I would like to suggest you something. Since Ankita is already ruined by Vikrant, give what the minority wants till the plane lands. Let Vikrant go wild on Ankita and also let Janvi fu+k Ankita out of jealously of her beauty. Maybe starpon or something. A little lesbian angle while Vikrant also do the same since thats what you wanted from the start. But when the plane lands, Vikrant finds out that Justcie is waiting for him. The 1st Ceo is there with cops. Vikrant lose all his assets to the first ceo. And when the ceo and his succesful son go inside the plane to check, they find Ankita all bruised and cigerrte marks and bite marks all over her body. The first ceo's son recognise Ankita. He had a crush on her since school days. They ceo and his son take Ankita in hospital and treat her and when Ankita recoveres she cries and complete Broken. Vikrant gave her no money and She knows what she lost and no one will accept her but at that moment the ceo's handsome son come and hugs Ankita and tells her that he loves her and want to marry her. He also saves Ankita's mother and bring her to their home. He Promises Ankita that he will always take care of her and will treat her like a Queen. Ankita's mother is happy too. The ceo, his wife, his daughter, his son and son's new wife Ankita lives happily and Ankita persue her dream and the ceo and ceo's son completely supoort Ankita. Ankita gets everything she wanted from life. Now I personally want something. Send Vikrant in jail full of gqys and let Janvi see how Ankita is now happy and living a luxurious like. I want to see the jealously and frustration on Janvi's face but she can't do anything because she is going in jail too full of bad fat lesbians. Finally Vikrant ends himself after 2 year or torture while Ankita lives her dream life. Will you do please do it?
Reply↴ • uid:8n9y1no144Silent Writer: I am writing new story part. After that will see for 4th part of this. In my actual 4th part vikrant handover Ankita to his Client to make the deal from where Ankita never manage return to her mother ever Again. But i know no one will like it now. So will see by your POV.
• uid:1dqky9viccrpLaracroft1984: Much appreciated. . Thank you for dropping the horrible ending. You really made the ending like that? Thats shocking. Again thanks and all you need to do is make write my points in detail of what I wrote. I'll wait for part 4
• uid:8n9y1no144Bt20: Silent writer. It will one of the most satisfying end. Plz dont listne to this Laracroft. We really want to see Ankita Got more more Destroy.
• uid:6hfu7wcv9bUV: Who is "we" BT20? I want Lara croft's happy ending one. You don't represent us all. Silent writer Please go with Lara Crofts suggestions
• uid:6stx4h0ficIsaac: No Author write part 4 of this story with Laracroft1084 idea. Don't move to another story without finishing this one with proper happy ending.
• uid:1360jpvm9iMaddog: How could you 😭
Reply↴ • uid:4bmz0tu16iaMaddog: why????
Reply↴ • uid:4bmz0tu16iaMaddog: sickening
Reply↴ • uid:4bmz0tu16iaDrillher: Silent writer this is the worst turn ever. Why you let Vikrant have her? Read the comments from this story's part 2 and part 1. We wanted Ankita to win and end Vikrant. Why Silent Writer
Reply↴ • uid:emd36p7qkLaracroft1984: Silent Writer, I appreciate your sorry but it won't bring back what Ankita lost. You really destroyed what we expected from u. But still I would like to suggest you something. Since Ankita is already ruined by Vikrant, give what the minority wants till the plane lands. Let Vikrant go wild on Ankita and also let Janvi fu+k Ankita out of jealously of her beauty. Maybe starpon or something. A little lesbian angle while Vikrant also do the same since thats what you wanted from the start. But when the plane lands, Vikrant finds out that Justcie is waiting for him. The 1st Ceo is there with cops. Vikrant lose all his assets to the first ceo. And when the ceo and his succesful son go inside the plane to check, they find Ankita all bruised and cigerrte marks and bite marks all over her body. The first ceo's son recognise Ankita. He had a crush on her since school days. They ceo and his son take Ankita in hospital and treat her and when Ankita recoveres she cries and complete Broken. Vikrant gave her no money and She knows what she lost and no one will accept her but at that moment the ceo's handsome son come and hugs Ankita and tells her that he loves her and want to marry her. He also saves Ankita's mother and bring her to their home. He Promises Ankita that he will always take care of her and will treat her like a Queen. Ankita's mother is happy too. The ceo, his wife, his daughter, his son and son's new wife Ankita lives happily and Ankita persue her dream and the ceo and ceo's son completely supoort Ankita. Ankita gets everything she wanted from life. Now I personally want something. Send Vikrant in jail full of gqys and let Janvi see how Ankita is now happy and living a luxurious like. I want to see the jealously and frustration on Janvi's face but she can't do anything because she is going in jail too full of bad fat lesbians. Finally Vikrant ends himself after 1 year or torture while Ankita lives her dream life. Will you do please do it?
Reply↴ • uid:8n9y1no144PumaSkyler: Lara I like your Idea but it can only do damage control. The real damage has already been done but thats atleast a good Idea. Author I support lara's plan. Go with it. Atleast It will be better than nothing.
• uid:1m5fofsid4Drillher: Hey Lara. I am completely on board with your plan. Go Lara. But to be honest i wanted Ankita to win untouched. I didn’t expect this from silent writer. He Anyways thanks Lara for such a positive suggestions.
• uid:emd36p7qkLaracroft1984: Everyone, let silent writer reply. Wait please. Don't comment under my comment for a while. I'm waiting for Silent Writer's comment
• uid:8n9y1no144Laracroft1984: And really thank you for backing my idea.
• uid:8n9y1no144Kinky weiner: Lara I like your idea can't we choose more brutal punishment for Janvi? I hate that bitch
• uid:emd36p7hkLaracroft1984: I wrote a suggestion I want to know if you are making it or not. Please reply to me.
Reply↴ • uid:8n9y1no144B.R.I.T.N.E.Y.: Yeah !!! I want to know to if you're going to make a change to Silent writer !!! Britney
• uid:1cr5cbcb27n4Laracroft1984: Britney? What are you doing here? Thanks for your comment. Did you read my suggestion? What do you think?
• uid:8n9y1no144Laracroft1984: Author I am waiting for your reply. Reply me please.
Reply↴ • uid:8n9y1no144Laracroft1984: Ofcourse the first part is for minorities like you who enjoy rape. But the rest of the part is for majority who wants to save Ankita including me. So both are happy even though the rape of ankita made a humangus backlash. Anyways. Please don't comment under my comment. I am waiting for Author's reply.
Reply↴ • uid:8n9y1no144Bingo: At first paragraph you are good rest is waste. But idea is good. If Ankita is that good then Janvi should also enjoy her. Do one think make Vikrant sell Ankita to his Client to whome he went to meet.
Reply↴ • uid:cyvrl1b0iPumaSkyler: Either the writer never reads the comments or he doesn’t care at all. This part 3 is a complete disappointment. A complete disaster. I'm really really pissed on Vikrant and you.
Reply↴ • uid:1m5fofsid4Alice: I can't believe you let that Haena have Ankita. How could you. I told you its a bad idea. I requested you to let Ankita punish Vikrant instead with the help of ex ceo and his son. This part is a disaster. Is there anyway to fix this? But how can we undo this damage? Vikrant already fucked Ankita. I can't believe you let this happen writer? Answer me please
Reply↴ • uid:7b6jlclxibPumaSkyler: Beyond dissapointed.
• uid:1m5fofsid4PumaSkyler: I'm beyond dissapointed on both Vikrant and writer.
• uid:1m5fofsid4Alice: Answer me please.
Reply↴ • uid:7b6jlclxibBiBoy: How many warnings did Ankita need? Vikrant's just a man with needs and a nice big cock for her to enjoy and savour, if she had allowed herself. He had no choice but to rape her, as she was being so unco-operative. Plenty more time in the air for Ankita to regret her resistance! Great!!
Reply↴ • uid:8n9x2i3m9iAlice: I can't believe you let that Haena have Ankita. How could you. I told you its a bad idea. I requested you to let Ankita punish Vikrant instead with the help of ex ceo and his son. This part is a disaster. Is there anyway to fix this? But how can we undo this damage? Vikrant already fucked Ankita. I can't believe you let this happen writer? Answer me please.
Reply↴ • uid:7b6jlclxibArya: Bhai galti tumahri hi hai. Jab itne logone kaha ki Ankita ko bachalo toh kyu yeh part aisa banaya. Ab main reqiest kar raha hoon ki end mat karo warna log aur gussa ho jayenge. Ankita ke sath plane mein jo karna hai karke Vikrant ko arrest karwao aur Ankita ko justice do. Ho sake toh ek aisa ladka jo ankita ko raani banaa ke rakhe aise ladke se shaadi bhi karwado.
Reply↴ • uid:45xywgwnqraVirgin lover: I thought he did a good job could have used a little more detail of him ripping her cherry apart and raping her. She sees his hard cock her pussy and the inside of her thighs covered in her virgin blood and cum as he pulls out of her. She didn't know anything could hurt that bad as having a hard cock forced inside her tight virgin pussy ripping her cherry then feeling it being forced deep inside of her stretching her to the limits and then raping her over and over
Reply↴ • uid:1evmzpkas3ptSilent writer: For those who didn't like this part then sorry for that. Maybe not needed to continue this part further. Let's start with new story. Not brut@l as this. Just soft ,er0tic and relaxing
Reply↴ • uid:6hfu7wcm9cEmber: Bro no. Don't drop this story midway. Finish this. Atleast let Ankita have a happy ending somehow. Maybe when the plane lands, Cops are waiting for Vikrant and also the rival ceo
• uid:38bw16xv3Drillher: You need to continue this story. You can end the story in a stage like this. This will be more disappointing. I agree with Lara. Just finish the 13 hours. Do whatever you like. I won't say anything but keep the ending kara mentioned. Thank u r going to do it. I am really upset on this part.
• uid:emd36p7qkEmber: What does Vikrant think of himself? Such arroganceand also this part is absolutely disgusting from my view.
Reply↴ • uid:38bw16xv3Carlos Ramos: This story is giving me a lot of frustration and anger. I hate Vikrant. I am still expecting Ankita get back her revenge and destroy Vikrant and Janvi
Reply↴ • uid:s9aqqwhlCarlos Ramos: Sorry I mean this part. Not story.
• uid:s9aqqwhlGuru: 5 star from my side too. But in place of that I expect more pain for Ankita
Reply↴ • uid:jkzq014oicKnull: Such a heartbreaking part. I am leaving guys. I can't read anymore. I had low expectations of Ankita getting saved and I was right.. I am leaving but I pray Ankita still gets a happy ending. May Vikrant face Karma soon..
Reply↴ • uid:7b6jlclzrbWhosh: Thats what i call perfect part. Vikrant you beauty. 13 hr to go to land. Yeh make her feel 13 hr as 13 years. 5star from my side bro.
Reply↴ • uid:6hfu7wcv9aneedkinky: Very bad bro very bad
Reply↴ • uid:1m5foftgqlArromdeezNuts: Can you still save ankita and let her marry a rich boy at the end of the story?
Reply↴ • uid:7b6jlcloi9ArromdeezNuts: Really I feel bad for ankita. Girl did nothing wrong. Just wanted to earn some extra cash by extra work. Such a tragedy. I am really upset about this plot. Save Ankita.
Reply↴ • uid:7b6jlcloi9Guru: From which angle you think Ankita has done nothing wrong. I can found only wrong person is Ankita. For st she need money so she decided to board the plane. And if she board a billionaire's private plane then she has to be submissive to the owner. Vikarant had already try 2-3 times to ask her nicely. But that b!tch girl decided to disobey the flight owner. So Vikrant is teaching her to obey. And Just see how Janvi is also helpful. So I am feeling bad for vikrant that even after being millionaire, owning own jet, helping Ankita by money, still that poor can't happily enjoy girl on his own private plane. Special respect for janvi who gave one more chance to Ankita. I wish for Ankita to suffer more pain.
• uid:jkzq014oicArya: Bhai yeh kya kar diya. Ankita ko pura loot liya. Mujhe gussa aa raha hai Janvi pe. Usko bada maza aa raha tha. Waise tum Indian hona? Tumhe kabhi kabhi comments bhi check kar lene chaiye ki tumhara readers kya mang rahe hai. Ankita ka rape kar diya. Ab aage kya irada hai? Koi bachane ayga ankita ko ya Vikrant isko chod chod ke fod dega? Kuch batao kya hone wala hai?
Reply↴ • uid:45xywgwnqraEasthampton92: Oh fuck bro. You seriously let him fuck Ankita??? That was a horrible take. Can you fix it somehow? I want Ankita win back her dignity somehow and money as well and Vikrant lose and rot in jail. Can you do that?
Reply↴ • uid:1360jpvm9iDainty: Its the same. But look what the author did
• uid:7b6jlclzriDainty: Auhtor how could you... I've seen people literary begging you in the comments. How could you let that monster win. This is really upsetting. I have have nothing left to say anymore. This was a utterly disgusting and disappointing.
Reply↴ • uid:7b6jlclqriArromdeezNuts: Not begging but now that I see the past comments, I am like omg yeah they did requested a lot
• uid:7b6jlcloi9Dainty: Yeah thats true but does it matter now?
• uid:7b6jlclzri